http://xforthefairest.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] xforthefairest.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] vlbuehle 2010-01-07 02:44 am (UTC)

I loved this so much. Your writing is so perfect, so in character and wonderful and if I could marry you I would.

I really loved the way the characters were portrayed in this, both of the characters' insecurities and the inevitability that they'd get past them all with each other. Sigh, I do love me some good proposal fic.

His crew kicked major league ass
Yes they do, Jim. Yes they do.

All in all, I really loved this. You're so talented, and this fic was so lovely and heartfelt but not overly schmoopy and I really wanted to see the scene that played out after this. ;)

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